You My dream

作者：雪泥

时间：2005-11-29 周二, 下午6:19

You My Dream

By W•E•SHOCK(USA)

My mind floats

Toward the stars

My hand floats

Over a breast

The hunger is intense

For you

This not a loving

Issue

Thinking is numbed

At this point

Do I advance in my

Touching anew

Do I continue to push forward

With this hand

Waiting for a signal on what

Next to do

The rest of me is still floating

In a dream

Yet all senses

Are very very keen

Sight, sound, smell

In abundance

My body shaking as I kiss

Tender lips

Oh I want you, oh I want you

This is for sure

And why not

Everything is just right

This night

But what is that sound I hear

A ringing in my ear

Now coming a feeling of fear

That you will quickly disappear

For you are so loving and sincere

But yet something is wrong

The feel is gone

You are becoming a blur

I want to hold a second more

A rush impowers

I want to explore

Now half awake

I sigh and shake

Just another sticky dream toward

You

Rise I must now do

Then go off to school

I look to the floor

Your face and body part

Looking back at me

Now I think

Now I see

A right kick

Magazine in hide

With one quick slide

Now to school

I head

A loving you

Under the bed

__________-

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点评：此诗后半部分有瑕疵，在‘Now half awake‘前都写得不错，有古韵

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